oh, sweetie.

oh, sweetie.

A Poem by xoxo

anxiety, oh a mental mindset that makes you think everything you do is wrong. a mindset that will make you turn knives into killers as your hand shakes around the handle. oh, sweetie, don't pop pills like your dead mother did. oh, sweetie, don't let the demons take over your mind. you're only 13, you can't die on me. anxiety, oh a mental mindset that will make you second guess yourself. a mindset that will make you turn all of the cars on the roads into a obstacle course. oh, sweetie, don't get drunk tonight, your already tired. oh, sweetie, put away the sharp things.

© 2017 xoxo



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Liked this a lot, the way you add sweetie, the words you use, the second verse is simply amazing, the imaginery is gold, and how in a few words you can tell such a story, this represents anxiety perfectly, one of my favorites

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

thank you so much :)
Anxiety is a serious problem, and you've penned it down beautifully. The last lines, the first lines, the everything! There's a slight dark feeling to it and that's what makes the poem so good.

Love,
Vasilees.

Posted 5 Months Ago


xoxo

5 Months Ago

thank you so much!!!
Anxiety can create OCD and depression. I see those issue going on in this piece as well. I have anxiety but luckily not the other two.

Posted 5 Months Ago


xoxo

5 Months Ago

yeah, it can create both.

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