Careless side of a Whisper

Whisper words that don't mean a thing

no ones going to listen anyway

why should i care if they hear

the truth may do some good.

never lying.

ever intelligent.

too emotional.

too depressing.

too sick.

thoughts from my mind would be considered the careless side of a whisper.

something that no one cares to hear but everyone seeks.

so effortless, flowing like blood through my veins.

sickening to think they are rejected, not wanted.

something people try to imitate.

lairs, cheaters, fake. all fake.

when it comes to something real.

dangerously real. they don't listen.

they say its just a careless side of a whisper.

Reviews

[Silere]

Isn't that the truth.. You've captured the true meaning here. I can't tell you how many times in my past that I've heard something damaging..but true.. yet I seem to be the only one paying attention. The ones that it would be damaging to the most.. seem to be ignoring the fact that it was said to begin with.. I love your choice of words..and the way you have organized them...as it has a good flow...and very easy to read. Keep writing from your heart.. and Thank you for sharing!

[Pandemonium]

On the part where it says
"to emotional.
to depressing.
to sick."
Those should all be "too" instead of "to"
This poem made me think about things and the people i know. I like how you repeated yourslef, it makes it so much more powerful. Once again, nice job!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is very true, great write

[Frantzuu]

Great poem, very expressed.