The sign on the door says...

 

Physically closed

Emotionally receptive

Body language slightly standoffish

Trying to be open, receptive

Feeling unsure of how to proceed

Looking for a signal

Waiting for a sign

Yield

Slow

Stop

Green light

Yellow light

Red light

Open for business

Be back in 5 minutes

Don't know what direction to go

Don't know which direction I'm going

Just looking for the sign that says go.

Reviews

[Mark D. Chevalier]

Apropo to life in general, not just the measure of personal interactions.

"Be back in 5 minutes," made me smile because I could picture the sign.

Cool poem L.

Mark

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sounds like emotional turmoil caused from not knowing what path in life to take... i loved how this makes the reader feel those mixed emotions at lightening fast speed just like life. Your an amazing writer.

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

I can relate to confusion. I'm guessing this can be applied in a romantic sense? I'm not usually into the freestyle poetry, but I like the personality and geniuness I get from this poem.

[Angel's Lady]

Wow. The message in each line is very dynamic. Great job. Definitely a keeper.

[Haden]

great comparison to life rayne! i love, love, love:

"Physically closed
Emotionally receptive
Body language slightly standoffish"

it's kinda like a description in a dating ad!! LOVE IT! you appear poised for action in this write. we can all relate. very nice write!

[Ms Jessica Renee]

Darling this is a brilliant write. The format gives it some power and I am no stranger to feel this way myself sometimes. Well done and thank you for sharing it with me. I look forward to more from you.

[Janice Ann]

I have felt this...Man, have I! Great read.

Thanks for sharing!
Janice Ann

[Staci Brown]

Feeling unsure of hot to proceed

hot = how

great lil write here about seeking direction amongst the chaos in our lives... :D

well done :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)