Alone Again

This was the first poem I wrote, that I remember. I was 10.

A mouse, a lemming, a lion,

the three

Running free.

A tear,

Maybe of fear.

Alone again with no one near.

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

A mouse, a lemming, a lion, -- What a trio, if you think of what each one represents...

Alone again with no one near. -- What a fascinating and introspective child you must have been, much like the adult you grew to be.

Great write. Wonderful of you to share such charming memories...Thanks for writing this, 10-year-old-Lee!

[Legion]

I wish I wrote that well when I was 10. Don't even think I had an inkling of what writing really was back then. Cool stuff. Love the imagery to this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh that is so cute, so your talent started at an early age I see.

[alternative_be]

Wow, this is so sweet and sad at the same time, I love the way it rhymes too!
I wish I had been more careful with my first poem, which ended up as a booklayer used by my mum.
She cherished it of course, but due to ware and tare it faded and only half of it is saved...
Thank you for posting this!
This is a real treasure!

[Marina]

I love this.I love the way it flows.
Great job.

XxStaySweet,
Rinaaaaaaaaaaaaaa