crushing

your cute in everyway,

your on my mind everyday,

something about you makes me smile,

when I see your smile its as long as the Nile,

when I see your eyes,

my heart beats faster every time,

when I hug you,

its like a dream come true,

when I see you,

I wonder if you see me too,

when you have to leave and say goodbye,

its like my heart dies inside,

I don't want you to go,

because when you do its like my heart dies slow,

I want you to stay,

I want to be with you of every second of everyday,

I like you because of your funny, cute, weird,

and because of your silly ways,

your cute what can I say,

for all I say is true,

all because I love you.

 

Reviews

[Kuandio]

It is a cute and lighthearted poem, but also with genuine emotion. I don’t know about the line “smile its as long as the Nile”, because it creates an image of a huge smile in my mind. I like that you made it rhyme. I wonder who the person is you are writing about?

[yuki]

this was a poem I wrote for the person i really really like and I met him a while back

[Totoro-Sama]

I love the rhyme scheme!
Some things may sound off,
but overall, the message is conveyed well!
I love this poem!