ode to us

ode to us

A Poem by yuki

no this world will never be,

this world was only meant for you and me,

no I cant take back the words I said,

cause if I did you'd be dead,

people look at us with uncertainty,

only because you and me do things differently,

they make us run and chase us away,

we will tear down this place,

and make it into our world of grace,

only heaven will be up here,

no more running away from fear,

where our smiles,

will run as long as the Nile,

where our hearts connect as one,

shining like the warm sun,

our love is magic,

but magic isn't magic when its no spell and doesn't cause something tragic,

this love of ours will always be happy,

not a love that's crappy,

this love will not be able to be erased by even the heavens themselves,

our world is our creation,

with each others dedication,

with each others strong hearts,

we will never be torn apart,

when we won't have to cling to insanity,

and wait for the world to ease up,

this is our magic and my ode to us.

 


© 2014 yuki



Author's Note

yuki
I did this because theres someone important to me and I hope there an important someone to you guess as well. hope you like it!

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1. "its" should be "there's" or "there is" on line 17? Somewhere there.

"our world is our creation,
with each others dedication,
with each others strong hearts,
we will never be torn apart,
when we won't have to cling to insanity,
and wait for the world to ease up,
this is our magic and my ode to us."

This part really touched me.
I have someone special as well. So I understand.
Thank you for this lovely poem!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yuki

3 Years Ago

im looking forward to reading more of yours too
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Totoro-Sama

3 Years Ago

Heehee~ Thanks!
I'm still doing research for my writing tho. xD



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I am not a grammar Nazi, but I think this has sparks of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w6Q3mHyzn78
I might be wrong oppose to expert's. But the song and the words scream louder than a fire alarm. B/c the emotion behind and in the words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


yuki

2 Years Ago

Thank you i shall have a look
1. "its" should be "there's" or "there is" on line 17? Somewhere there.

"our world is our creation,
with each others dedication,
with each others strong hearts,
we will never be torn apart,
when we won't have to cling to insanity,
and wait for the world to ease up,
this is our magic and my ode to us."

This part really touched me.
I have someone special as well. So I understand.
Thank you for this lovely poem!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yuki

3 Years Ago

im looking forward to reading more of yours too
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Totoro-Sama

3 Years Ago

Heehee~ Thanks!
I'm still doing research for my writing tho. xD

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age:17 1/2 bday: September 17 things I like;long boarding, singing,hanging with friends yes I am a Asian girl in a white girls body but I don't mind. im always the shy one whos afraid to speak so.. more..

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