lonely

why am I the one who's always feeling alone,

always the last person to be left behind,

it hurts me so much I cry, weep, and moan,

I have gotten used to it, but I really do mind,

 

but no one seems to really know,

only this feeling of emptiness is here,

Im always gonna be alone so,

I guess even the closest person isn't near,

 

I only wish for people to hold me close,

so I could just be in their warm arms,

and always be happy as if on a happy dose,

or be enchanted by their powerful charms,

 

but this is only a dream that I can imagine,

'cause no one see's me in their eyes,

that's why I am so saddened,

when I don't even get a goodbye,

 

no one see's me,

and no one will,

that's who I'll always be,

and that will always be the deal.

Reviews

[Jake Donald Stephens]

My feelings exactly. Sigh.
You hit the nail on the head. Well done.

[Chidoriflower]

I get this...Painful and achey-feeling. An ache you get even when there's nothing there...just emptiness. A hug is always nice. :) Well penned, my friend.

[yuki]

That you for ur comment

[Anonymous]

I love this poem, it's so easy to relate to, and written so wonderfully! :)

[yuki]

Thank you i try my best

[V. P. Trujillo]

You have a good way with words, and broke this down into a polished write, as simply put as it is, polished well. I liked reading it, thanks.

[yuki]

Im always good with words when writing poetry because it comes from the heart not the mind,my friend

[For Who I Am]

Wow! I can really feel the pain because I was in a situation like this. Wonderfull poem! I love the use of words in your own element. Keep up the good work! You'll get to your goall!

[yuki]

thank you!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I can relate to this in some ways, stunning write.

Kaze~

[yuki]

thank you!

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)