natures love

the sky is full blue,

not a cloud in sight,

its like the world is brand new,

while the sun makes everything shine a light,

 

I hear nothing but mother natures birds,

and the cold wind blowing against our face,

I hear no words,

nature will really put us in an amazing daze,

 

with every breath you take,

you can smell the beautiful flowers,

with every step you make,

natures aroma will make us lay here for hours,

 

you just lay in the cool grass smelling the sweet air,

with that special person laying beside you,

thinking of how much they really like you and how much they care,

and how much you really like and care for them too.

 

Reviews

[SLY Girl]

So innocent and sweet, I love that! It's reminiscent for me of how I felt about my first childhood crush. :)

[yuki]

thank you so much :) I try to make it sweet :D

[Malister Mikey]

I love how gentle this one feels and I really liked the rhyme scheme quite a bit. Good work as always Yuki

[yuki]

I was going for gentle yet loving I think it came out well :) thank you :)

[Malister Mikey]

you did do that very well

[yuki]

haha thanks :)

[Joey]

I really like this Poem :)

[yuki]

thank you :)