Loss

Loss

A Poem by poetsmind
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A sad poem, perceive it how you will.

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Harsh bright lights
Piercing white walls
Tears
Screams of agony
The smell of death lingering in the air
The doors swinging wildly
The pain apparent in their eyes
Yellow skin
Dead eyes
No pulse
Just...
GONE
Nothing left
No more hugs
No more conversation
Just an empty, broken heart
That still yearns for what was ripped away
That which will never return again
That which is forever lost

© 2017 poetsmind


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Your poem paints the picture of emotions that run wide when someone becomes absent forever in our lives.
Harsh bright lights
Piercing white walls

these lines are worthy to praise.
Thanks for writing:)


Posted 6 Years Ago


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Added on November 16, 2017
Last Updated on November 16, 2017
Tags: sad, poem, depressed, life, loss, sadness

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poetsmind
poetsmind

San Diego, CA



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