Musical Dawn

The start of the day .. a glorious sunrise.....

A musical vision as dawn begins

The vibrant colours like humming strings

Then voices sing mysteriously

As reflections fall across the sea

The sirens wail with darkened clouds

But dawn fights back and calls aloud

To shed a symphony of light

Providing all with such delight

An oratorio of sheen

As colours dance so brightly seen

A flute of birds just flutters by

As soft as any lullaby

Until crescendos reached so high

And dawn at last just fills the sky

 

Phil Sanders

7/2/08

Reviews

[ah]

great imagery, great metaphors, great write, thanks for asking me to read, keep writing

[Michael X]

wonderfully vibrant my friend, the depth defines this work of creativity
with colorful, vivid, passionate, heartfelt effect, sentencing is crafted
to portrait imagery, the flow is harmonious, and reflects soul, excellent
poetry, the gentle ambience is warm to the readers thoughts, the detail
in the wording is visually concieved, the rhyme form is equally impressive, mike

[Sally Edwards]

Wow you never cease to amaze me, I would never have thought of a sunrise as musical , this is amazing writing, it caught my imagination and I could hear it in my mind, and the wonderful bonus of a stunning image too.

[A.J. Smith]

Ah, music to my ears, and eyes. Wonderfully creative and soothing.

[An Ordinary Woman]

I doo love this piece, I think we need reminders of glorious mornings, especially when things are so bleak for so many.... *sighs with amazement at your talent for painting pictures with words.

[Candle in the wind]

I love the soft music , vivid imagination and vibrancy of colors in your lilting poem.