Eternal Pleasure With You

A love poem ...

Your laughter fills my ears
Just like a lovely song
I’d listen to you all the day
And then the whole night long

Your words have lots of interest

As conversation flows

We talk for hours together

Enjoying our repose

I watch your eyes just flicker

As you listen to me talk

And then I feel so proud

As together we do walk

I want to do the simple things

And share each day with you

Because you banish all my woes

And stop me feeling blue

Your sensual ways entice me

And make me want you more

Excitement courses through me
As we reach the bedroom door

For you are filled with passion

A beauty to behold

I want to make sweet love with you

With openness so bold

To walk along the sandy shores

With hands and hearts entwined

Our bodies loving tenderly

Until the end of time

 

Phil Sanders

8/2/08

Reviews

[Red Raven]

soft yearn....i will say!
well done!

[Candle in the wind]

Another instance of passionate longing I can see.Good! you make it palpable!

[Daisy]

Mmmm. this is cool and floats along so lovingly and peacefully. your are really sweet Phil.

[Matt]

Amazing simply amazing

[Kim Kruger]

Pure romance, especially in the last four lines; my favorite part of the poem. Wonderful Phil. So glad I chose today to finally get to it. :)

[Sally Edwards]

Gorgeous words, they flow so smoothly off the page and have me sighing and wishing for such delights..... You are such a romantic and I love the sensual lines

Our bodies loving tenderly
Until the end of time......

Beautiful

[An Ordinary Woman]

I want to make sweet love with you
With openness so bold... Glorious Days! Such beautiful words, Phil. You have the magic ...

[A.J. Smith]

I like the flow and progression of this, and your rhyming and rhythm is terrific. Thanks for sharing!

[Amor-de-angel]

Perfect...sensual and romantic..now turn the lights down....