Come Walk With Me ....

A tender love poem ....

The beauty of your smile is like a Summer’s day …

Warm and inviting …

I feel your love radiating from within …

Your loveliness is glowing…

Each moment that I spend with you …

So magical …..

You are the brightness of the morning …

With depth of a lifetime…..

Your voice echoes in my soul …

Enticing me to deeper love ….

I feel the calmness of a empty beach…

As I hold your hand …

Wanting to walk with you into eternity …

Such a delicious thought …

The years will not age you in my eyes …

For your beauty is timeless…

I will be there beside you …..

Through every minute of your life …

You are enchantment personified…

And I adore you …

You patiently wait for me to understand …

And then love me even more..

How lucky can one man be ??

To know the intimacy of your eyes..

The gentleness of your touch…

I know such deep, deep feelings…

That only you create…

I am burning inside with passion and love..

For you my soulmate …

Come walk through the forest of life with me..

Into the sunlight of forever….

Phil Sanders

16/6/08

Reviews

[Gary H]

Mmmm. This reads like a summing up of various other poems you have written. Whilst still showing love I just think you have written far better musings and I'm pulled towards going back and reading them instead of this. However, I am only writing my opinion and realise I am vastly outnumbered.
To be honest, not all love poems are going to have the same effect on males as females anyway - I hope!

[Ice QueenJen]

oh Phil..... this is exactly how I feel about my guy, my soulmate. I love the line " come walk through the forest of life with me, into the sunlight of forever"

This was a poem of perfection and love- so different than Gary's assessment! And yes it does have a different effect on females- at least it did to me.

[jen -- JG]

Love is like music - there are only so many notes or feelings but many ways to express them.

You have achieved another way to express the way you feel, with beauty and grace.

Cheers

Jen

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Oh what a beautiful write about lifes most awesome feeling... Love
It is a time that once experienced you never forget or want to live
without. I very much enjoyed the read inspite of the longing feelings
I am left with...
Hugs
D

[Catrinka]

awww, this is another beautiful poem, Phil! Tender, romantic, the way love should be, in my humble opinion! Kudos!

[Nicholas Hallows]

Very warm words! I was thinking how calm it seemed and then I got to the line 'calmness of a empty beach'.
I guess that means your purpose was achieved.

[Angel's Lady]

How lucky can one man be ??

I believe in your case, it should read, How lucky could one woman get??

Great write, you sexy swashbuckler you! (It is such a good thing an ocean separates us! I might be tempted to track you down! wink, wink)

[Amor-de-angel]

You brough a lump to my throat and shiver up my spine. You are a master at these romantic poems Phil. With you around love won't ever fade......

Wonderful

[Wildfleour]

You are such a sweetie and romantic!

Your love must adore what you write for her! :)

[Fran Marie]

A lovely piece Phil as always your poetry is always so beautifully expressed and a joy to read

THanks for sharing~Fran MArie