Take me to heaven

She has already taken me to heaven. This is for her, the girl I've come to love.

Take me to heaven, my dearest love

With your love ever so tender

Take me to the eternal skies above

As I sleep in sweet surrender

 

We’ll touch the sky together

We’ll dance above the sea of blue

And kiss the sun in its splendor

What matters is that I’m with you

 

We’ll weave the clouds into dreams

And cross the boundaries of reality

Bold are my countless schemes

We’ll conquer infinity

 

The world is here for us to discover

And the sky, welcoming and open

Hundreds of mysteries to uncover

Please take me to heaven

Reviews

[B.E. Gonzales]

My poems write themselves. The mind gives birth to ideas. My hands write them down on paper. That's how a poem should be. The poem writes itself onto the mind through inspiration and the poet can only stand as an instrument to write that thought down on paper. I cannot call myself a good writer or orator yet. I still have to learn a lot. I do not call myself smart because I still have a lot to learn. The two lessons I want to explore more are lessons about love and lessons about life. "Without love, there wouldn't be any life. Without life, there wouldn't be any love."

[aljude de guia]

you know... im so proud at you my classmate... your only 13 yrs old turning to 14 someday..... your poems are so lovely and amazing...wish you all the best bryan....im so proud of you....by the way... i love it....

[Alz Alz]

The rhyme really helps to move a reader along :) This poem is so sweet... I hope she knows how lucky she is! This is very well written with excellent form and rhyme! 100/100!