Tell Me

Tell Me

A Poem by B.E. Gonzales
" explains her the best.

Tell me, my love
What craft or art
Or hand from above
Forged thy beautiful form?

Such perfect symmetry
And lovely architecture
Tell me
What fate or destiny
Had written thy beauty,
fragile creature?

Sweet lips
That immortal touch
Addictive eyes to match!
Only the hands of God
Could have made
Such a tame maid!

Am I worthy
To enjoy thy beauty
So fair
To ecstasy compare?

© 2010 B.E. Gonzales

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Hey, Dude, I can notice that you write stuff about Love more than anything else..inspired much? XD By the way, very nice..

-see you in school XD

Posted 8 Years Ago

i dont believe you're 13!
This is pro stuff!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Absolutely beautiful! :)

Good luck in my contest! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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B.E. Gonzales
B.E. Gonzales

Ouezon City , National Capital Region , Philippines

I am 13 years old from the Philippines. I write short stories, essays, plays, and songs. I specialize in poetry, both in English and Tagalog, my native tongue. I usually write about love, life, Death,.. more..


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