Paper Heart-Part II

Paper Heart-Part II

A Poem by B.E. Gonzales
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Even from a distance, she shaped my paper heart.

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You drew your dreams

Onto my paper heart

Your every hope

Your every wish

 

My heart was your diary

I would listen to you

On the phone all night

I would keep every call

In my heart

 

My soul was your canvas

What was once a blank soul

An empty soul

Now burns with festive colors

 

Colors, wild and bright

Move me everyday

Shaking me when I forget you

Embracing me when I love you


© 2010 B.E. Gonzales



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So beautiful. Description and story in your words made the poem a pleasure to read. I like your use of words. Always look forward to reading your poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


great job on this one too... I really like the image of the colors on the canvas...wonderful

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is by far the best of the Paper Heart series!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I really like this, it has beautiful imagery and I like the way you said "you drew your dreams onto my paper heart." really good write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this very much. It has been a long time since I have felt anyone "draw their dreams" on my heart and you have portryed the feelings so very well. Kudos. ~Jim

Posted 7 Years Ago



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B.E. Gonzales
B.E. Gonzales

Ouezon City , National Capital Region , Philippines



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I am 13 years old from the Philippines. I write short stories, essays, plays, and songs. I specialize in poetry, both in English and Tagalog, my native tongue. I usually write about love, life, Death,.. more..

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