A Place Only I Know

A Place Only I Know

A Poem by Bryce Simonds

The pitter-patter of rain plays outside my window

Its sweet melody takes me to a place only I know

Where the blue birds sing,

Where seas are filled with sorrow,

Where there is no such thing as a good morrow.

 

This place I know is where I think

Where I cry, where I drink

I sit here alone inside this place,

Waiting, wondering, wishing strong,

For something better to come along.

 

As the rain drops cease to fall

I come back to where I was, sitting against my wall

And now I realize I just want to let you know,

I think you're most beautiful when you don't even try,

And from everything you've ever told me, I still don't understand why.

© 2010 Bryce Simonds


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This is Bryan Warchol, Bryce, HI!!!!

On your poem, Very deep and very heartfelt. You can feel your emotion clinging to each one of your sentences. I always like to point out things I find wrong with poems, critiques if you will, to try to help but I have to say, that this is a very good piece very nice flow, very smooth writing. It something everyone can relate to, man or women. You clearly write from your heart and about what you know and I hope you keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Great poem! I really like it! It's deep and I think poeple can relate to it. Nice job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is Bryan Warchol, Bryce, HI!!!!

On your poem, Very deep and very heartfelt. You can feel your emotion clinging to each one of your sentences. I always like to point out things I find wrong with poems, critiques if you will, to try to help but I have to say, that this is a very good piece very nice flow, very smooth writing. It something everyone can relate to, man or women. You clearly write from your heart and about what you know and I hope you keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha yes I did mean that, I just saw that after I posted it, and right before I read this review, thank you though!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Where seas are filled sorrow
did you mean filled 'with'?
:) the imagery here is wonderful! love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Bryce. I am 19 years of age. I don't look at myself as much of a poet, but I write anyway. I write poetry when I feel as if I have something to write. That happens mostly when I'm eithe.. more..

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