Dissatisfaction

Dissatisfaction

A Poem by E.A. Spain
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Dark Monologue

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Dissatisfaction sits begrudgingly in the pit of my stomach
and continues to remind me of
all the things
all the things I have strive for and missed every ball I dropped
every f**k boy I kissed

Dissatisfaction makes a hideaway in my being
burrows in deep and starts to clinging
and I try to cover it up for people
because it's not worth seeing
but you can believe it

I'm a human being in this life
but where is the meaning
I've got all this pinned up strife
& the insides of my mind could use a deep cleaning
The whereabouts of my breakthrough is unknown
if it even exists
maybe if I just speak it enough into existence it'll be fixed
I suppose only God knows
but I'm not so sure if he hears my woes

Dissatisfaction is taking over
it's laying claim to my brain
it's settling into my pores
and I just want to stay sane



© 2018 E.A. Spain



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E.A. Spain
written may 31st 2017

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I really like the rhythm to this poem and I also love it whenever the word 'fuckboy' is used in a poem. I heard there is a tea brewed in Peru where the Earth is soft and this tea has the potential to cleanse the minds of stress and worries but it might just be a rumor. Thanks for sharing this poem!

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"I just want to stay sane" is a good last line in this poem. Though your poem conveys pain, frustration and bitterness, the last line implies "stay in the fight, keep going, etc." That "dissatisfaction" you address in this poem is actually a gift. That's right. It's a gift. It's the human brain, memory, saying that didn't work out so well, that person is not good for you, etc. It's a message to take a different path, make different decisions, etc. And, that's the connection to "sanity." For the definition of "insanity," as I once read, is doing the same thing and expecting different results. And, the result of doing the same is "dissatisfaction."

This is probably a bit off from your original intent with this poem, but it's my takeaway. Good stuff. Keep writing.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love the rhythm of this piece, liked your first stanza. awesome write

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


I really like the rhythm to this poem and I also love it whenever the word 'fuckboy' is used in a poem. I heard there is a tea brewed in Peru where the Earth is soft and this tea has the potential to cleanse the minds of stress and worries but it might just be a rumor. Thanks for sharing this poem!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: dark, dissatisfaction, dark days, vibes, deep, monologue, reflection, self reflection, life, love lost, adversity, questioning God

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E.A. Spain

Grove City, OH



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