ETERNAL

ETERNAL

A Poem by E.A. Spain

For as long
As the breath
In this body
Exists

Forever
In this life
And into the next

Before the beginning
And after the end


I Am.

© 2018 E.A. Spain



Author's Note

E.A. Spain
-my boyfriend wrote this and would like some feedback

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Very simple, yet powerful if you look beyond the initial words.


As always, Keep writing

-Cat

Posted 1 Month Ago


I like the feel of the words.. It makes one think if we are eternal while death proves the mortality of our bodies. Tell him it was a good write..

Posted 2 Months Ago


What a beautiful and precise summary of the divine, physical and eternal nature of Mankind!

WELL DONE

Posted 2 Months Ago


nice words i really loved it

Posted 3 Months Ago


I admire writers to can send a powerful message in few words. This is a good example. I'm assuming the "I am" reference is to the title, "Eternal." If so, it certainly conveys a strong faith and a confidence in self.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so very good,
flowed well too.
love it, it has style

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Jas
This isn't very good, I like how you structured it

Posted 3 Months Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

E.A. Spain

3 Months Ago

could you explain specifically what about it you don't like? something a bit more constructive would.. read more
Jas

3 Months Ago

Sorry about the auto correct I should proof read before I comment, I meant that it's very good. I ha.. read more
E.A. Spain

3 Months Ago

oh okay! well thanks!
Thanks for sharing, this poem is cute and conveys a sense liveliness alongside momentary bliss while reading it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 3, 2018
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Tags: eternal, eternity, forever, I am, self

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E.A. Spain
E.A. Spain

Grove City, OH



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