A Poem by E.A. Spain

For as long
As the breath
In this body

In this life
And into the next

Before the beginning
And after the end

I Am.

© 2018 E.A. Spain

Author's Note

E.A. Spain
-my boyfriend wrote this and would like some feedback

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Very simple, yet powerful if you look beyond the initial words.

As always, Keep writing


Posted 7 Months Ago

I like the feel of the words.. It makes one think if we are eternal while death proves the mortality of our bodies. Tell him it was a good write..

Posted 7 Months Ago

What a beautiful and precise summary of the divine, physical and eternal nature of Mankind!


Posted 8 Months Ago

nice words i really loved it

Posted 9 Months Ago

I admire writers to can send a powerful message in few words. This is a good example. I'm assuming the "I am" reference is to the title, "Eternal." If so, it certainly conveys a strong faith and a confidence in self.

Posted 9 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so very good,
flowed well too.
love it, it has style

Posted 9 Months Ago

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This isn't very good, I like how you structured it

Posted 9 Months Ago

0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

E.A. Spain

9 Months Ago

could you explain specifically what about it you don't like? something a bit more constructive would.. read more

9 Months Ago

Sorry about the auto correct I should proof read before I comment, I meant that it's very good. I ha.. read more
E.A. Spain

9 Months Ago

oh okay! well thanks!
Thanks for sharing, this poem is cute and conveys a sense liveliness alongside momentary bliss while reading it.

Posted 9 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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8 Reviews
Added on February 3, 2018
Last Updated on February 3, 2018
Tags: eternal, eternity, forever, I am, self


E.A. Spain
E.A. Spain

Grove City, OH

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