BELLISSIMA

BELLISSIMA

A Poem by EMMIE

So much color on that little flower   
Morning sun rays gently waking its allure 
The essence of love
Created by the Almighty 
Nature's irresistible aroma 
Fresh and joyful colors 
Oh, what a sight to see! 
That lovely little flower
Just laying there....
                                                                                                                     On a lonely grave   










© 2013 EMMIE



Author's Note

EMMIE
Lol one of these days I'll write something that's a 100% happy with no dark or sad twists I promise! Lol one of these days...

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The twisted end We all know it is our own tale as well as nature is beautiful we are finite

Posted 4 Years Ago


A very beautiful beginning of nature's beauty and God above and then the shock of the sadness of death's reality, our souls leaving our loved ones with an echo of us. A strong write. So well penned.

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Eric!
Eric Cox

4 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Hahaha yep one day you might. However the use of a grave hits the reader and its good for the poem. Nice job

Posted 4 Years Ago


I have the least words to grace the golden piece that the Almighty has done some trick!

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

lol thank you
zainul

4 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
oh ... reading along and then zing what a impact that made !

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

Ha ha! Thanks for taking the time
Renée

4 Years Ago

a pleasure ( :
You juxtapose life on death which creates beautiful art. Poets, musicians, and artists all appreciate the melancholy. If you didn't, you'd just write love poems that were mediocre, right?

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

Ha ha true enough. Thank you!
The Analog Kid

4 Years Ago

YW..anytime:)
Such a light it brings to the usual dismay of death, it shows to me that maybe it should be as feared as most people tend to fear death but more embraced to see the light at the end.

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

Thank you much!
Flowers are positive. Life upon death create hope. I like the description and how you ended the poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


It is very interesting. I liked how you mixed the light and the dark together. Very well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

Thank You
mixture between flowers with their sweet colors and nice essences with graves with how much fearing they look..i like it..

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

Thank ya!

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Added on February 1, 2013
Last Updated on February 17, 2013
Tags: flowers, death, grave, beauty, morning, life, funeral, allure


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