ASHES

ASHES

A Poem by EMMIE

Dear, Allah

I am tired of this world

I want to bask in the glory of your power

I want to look into your eyes and feel alive

I want to sing you songs of praise

I want peace in my heart

I want you to accept me


Dear, Allah

I am tired of this world

Let the evil people burn

Let me be their fire

Let me fill the air with my smoke

Let me kill the ones who don't believe

Let me show them what an angry God you can be


Dear, Allah

I am tired of this world

I will blow it up

I will make them shout with terror

I will take away their souls

I will see your will be done

I will kill and die to see you up in paradise


Hello, America

Your satanic ways will end

Now prepare to be burned

You will suffer pains unknown

For I am strapped with bombs

I am soldier of the Righteous

And you...

               you are ashes



© 2013 EMMIE



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Nicely executed, Emmie. You pulled no punches. I am right there with you:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

Thank you =)
The Analog Kid

4 Years Ago

Good to see ya around!
Well Done! Keep it up!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Told you I'd be back and DAMN... I come back to some straight fire!

Takes a lot of guts to write a poem that both educates the reader and pokes fun at stereotypical thoughts of the modern, ignorant mind. I loved this piece. Loved the aggression. Love the style.

Write on.

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

Thanks...glad you understand, this poem could be easily misunderstood
The world through the eyes of a child taught to hate. Strange how men espousing the glory and love of God direct children to hate others for their place of birth, gender, religion, and nationality and then to injure, maim, and kill indiscriminately both the righteous AND the innocent.

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

And that is the truth! Thank you!
Well Done! Keep it up! Do u read mine 2 manner..if possible then gives ur review.. U can also add me on facebook

Posted 4 Years Ago


as a muslim. an an arab one who has read alot about Islam. and Quran is in my own tongue, let me tell you, i didnt like the meanings you have expressed here. look how the words are similar..Islam and salam (peace). as muslims, we dont greet others with hi or hello. we greet others with assalamu alikom(peace be upon you). islam is the message of peace. if Allah wanted all people to be muslims He could do it. first muslims had the power to kill nonmuslims in muslim countries but they have never done it. i can understand your anger from the united states politics but what is the guilty of the American people?

Posted 4 Years Ago


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EMMIE

4 Years Ago

I think you are totally not understanding the message here. These are not my own thoughts and opinio.. read more
Very creative piece here. powerful wordplay. Thanks for sharing Emmie :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

thank YOU
The Elusive Mr Dunne

4 Years Ago

Yw :)
Needless to say, this is an incredibly powerful and chilling piece...you've presented the mindset of a terrorist with astounding clarity...well done Emmie :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

Thank youuuuu
What a creative piece you have brought forth. I respect you for posting this. I REALLY LOOK FORWARD to reading more of your work...Another writer with no fear, welcome...thank you for the friendship request.

Posted 4 Years Ago


EMMIE

4 Years Ago

No prob, thank you! No fear indeed lol

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