* * * * Wish Upon A Star * * * *

Wish Upon A Star As I look up, to my delight Stars are shining bright tonight Should I wish upon this falling star Oh my sweet love, tell me where you are     The moon shines gently through the trees Theres no other place, I would rather be I know theres a sweet love, some where for me I just haven't found you, can't you see     Smiling face, eyes that sparkle so bright Are you looking everywhere for me tonight Don't be shy, please don't hide For I will stand there, right by your side       Ever so gently, I shall hold your hand I'd be oh so proud, to be your loving man I long to find an honest loving wife That will love me, for the rest of my life   By Ray Hamilton Not a poet and I know it! © Copyright 6 / 2008 All rights Reserved      Please Visit Me at The Poet's Nest

 

Reviews

[Aspiring Angel]

Good Morning Rey,

This is so lovely and sincere. I surely hope you continue to wish upon those falling stars. Everyone desearves to find happiness.
I know someone very dear to me that has almost given up the wishing. Hmmmmmmm ROTFL

Blessings,
Lesa

[Lia]

Beautiful piece, sooo sweet! Thanks for sharing x

[Suelou]

A beautiful, touching pome. This is a wish I would make for myself.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

This is a sweet poem, Ray. How do you get such cool backgrounds???

[doreen cyr]

very grande wish hope you find her.
doreen

[Valentine]

Beautiful background to set off your shosen words.too bad some lonely lady can't read this and give you a call..You might find that special falling star together..Gods..valentine

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This is just beautiful! So honest and full of hope and love . . .

Not that I'm biased, but I just love the stars . . . smiles . . .

And I love this poem. Simple, pure, and straight from the heart.

[The Dark Priest]

This is great! I love the background and how it mends well with the contents of each stanza

[emmajoy]

So lovely, both the words and the background. Just have some flyers made with ...

'As I look up, to my delight
Stars are shining bright tonight
Should I wish upon this falling star
Oh my sweet love, tell me where you are'

... printed upon them... you can't go wrong!

[Lena M. P.]

No one should have to look into a star filled sky without a lover in hand. Hope your wishes come true. Just teasing. Enjoyed the poem. It made me smile. Delightful!