Liar

Another poem about heartbreak.

 

I just believed in us

Thought you really loved me

But I can’t believe

What you’ve made me see.

There’s that girl you met

And because of her

You left me behind

As you bit her lure.

I should have seen it coming

I wasn’t like the others before

The others you have loved

Were not left alone, sore.

You forgot about me

And how I was waiting for your answer

You didn’t tell me about her

Until I myself discovered.

At least now you know

That I love you really

Please stay my friend

Forever and truly.

Reviews

[LSS]

This is the second rhymed poem of yours I've read, they are good but not as great as your free-style writing, where you excel. The more rhyming you write, the easier it comes off; getting the meter and measure soothes out the pieces too and allows them to flow better. Keep practicing and let this style become one of your mastery's too.
LSS

[The DuchessPoet]

Love truly is about forgiveness, acceptance and friendship... sometimes in that exact order!
This is a good poem and I LOVED the ending!

Bravo, on another well written piece!

Again, Thank you for sharing!

[An owl on the moon]

So beautiful and bittersweet... A gentle plea for a love to last, even in the midst of heartache... Wish you best with all your dreams of writing. Don't ever give up...

Craig