Carpe Diem

Carpe Diem

A Poem by Caedis

Flung against the universe
Swept into its wonders
Swimming through the living stars
A bunch of rebel thunders.

© 2017 Caedis


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I love short and minimalistic poetry. Your poem is especially great because it really packs a punch! You used wonderful symbolism and imagery. I like how you said "flung against the universe" instead of something simple and cliche. Wonderful read :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Caedis

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I really appreciate the comment!
Really honestly the best one I've read all day you have a very stunning talent that was just so much fun to read and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Please right more you genuise !

Posted 7 Years Ago


Caedis

7 Years Ago

Thank you, for your review and nice words. I'll write more in the near future.

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Added on March 6, 2017
Last Updated on March 6, 2017
Tags: life, changes, fear, journey, carpe diem, thunder

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Caedis
Caedis

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I'm an aspiring tattoo artist whose goals lay in art and literature. I write poems, fiction novels, essays, short stories etc. My work is strictly correlated with my inspiration. I'm very open-minded .. more..

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