before collection

before collection

A Poem by Not Afraid of Bruises
"

just words- inspired by one of Fionn Regan's songs

"

quick

before I become antique,

well-aged like cheap wine,

before some old man comes to collect me from

the curb side

 

let me adventure as

humans were made to,

quiet and flowing

along swift air currents to where

you sleep...

 

and I will go willingly into

collection,

knowing that you sleep, gently. 

© 2008 Not Afraid of Bruises


Author's Note

Not Afraid of Bruises
brutality is key :)

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And why has no one commented on this? This is absolutely beautiful....the first stanza is my favorite, because I too feel that fleeting glimpse of an emotion.....wonderful job.

if you don't mind, though, could you tell me what this is about?

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Not Afraid of Bruises
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somewhere beyond the Tagglewood, RI



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