You Made My Heart Bleed

You Made My Heart Bleed

A Poem by Caitlin
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Not my best poem...

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The sun shining down,
Water crystal blue,
On the white sand beach,
It’s just me and you.
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Wind in our faces,
Seagulls flying high,
This moment seems perfect,
Not a cloud in the sky.
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You said that you loved me,
And I didn’t have a doubt,
That this would last forever,
Day in, and day out.
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That one magical moment,
I thought meant that we would be,
Together forever and always,
Just us, you and me.
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You lean in to kiss me,
We both close our eyes,
Little did I know,
You were full of lies.
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You really didn’t love me,
It was me you didn’t need,
Knowing how much you didn’t care,
Caused my heart to bleed.

© 2010 Caitlin


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Caitlin
Not my best poem, please help me to make it better!

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