A thousand heartaches

She endured a thousand heartaches

A normal being could not bear

They crushed her heart

They killed her soul

Left her bleeding 

Left her there.

She endured a thousand heartaches

Leaving her broken

Leaving her sore

She's not a fighter

She's just a girl

But never did they care.

She endured a thousand heartaches

Nothing was left

Nothing at all

They took her spirit

So she could fall

All she could do was cry and moan.

She endured a thousand heartaches

Now her heart is hard like stone

The sweet smile gone

The innocence gone

No trace of what was once

The girl who endured it all.

Reviews

[blegh]

sounds like me half of the time. lol
you're an awesome poet. keep writing more!

[Carissa Marie]

Aww. Thank you! Yes, I would definitely write more. :)

[blegh]

yay!

[Carissa Marie]

:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're a great poet. I like your style in writing. I can feel the emotion.

[Carissa Marie]

Thank you so much. I just love writing poetry. :)

[Joan*Eckhart]

This was a well written, dark piece of writing.

[Carissa Marie]

Thanks. :)