Fire in the rain

Rain
Like a curtain
Sparkles around us

Lock onto my heart
Stare into my eyes
And

Kiss me
Steam
From the fire you set alight

Lightning in my skin
Never have felt so lightheaded
Loving you is cold but warming

Hot and cold
Off and on
I get these feelings

I'm not sure
Maybe you know why

Thick and heavy
Rain pours without a sign of stopping

Umbrella over my head
Arm around my shoulders

Walking home in the rain

Reviews

[I.N.Kelly]

Lock onto my heart
Stare into my eyes
And

Kiss me
Steam
From the fire you set alight

This is my favorite part. I really like the visual and the emotion behind it. Thank you for sharing!
besh wishes
kelly

[Azriel]

enjoyed this a lot, so much warmth in the tone, love the images used and your use of language and form is excellent.

[Frieda P]

Love the title, being showered with love sounds good to me! Nice one.

[Chloe]

Thank you! All I could think of was Adele while writing the title...

[Frieda P]

That makes sense, although her rain wasn't quite so friendly....

[Chloe]

Ooh yeah...

[haymaker14]

Wow! Very good... you might be a finalist 2 times!

[Chloe]

Thanks Hailey! Glad you like it!

[haymaker14]

NP!