rainy day

though the sky is gray,
the sun is sure to come.
when you face your darkest days,
remember,
the night will come lighting the world with stars.
the cycle, of disaster turned victory.....
it, is truly beautiful.

Author's Note

this is my first post...i normally won't be doing poetry, i'm not much of a poet, i just posted this because i had it in my head.
EDIT: whoa you guys! Thanks for all the reviews on this!

Reviews

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i really like this piece...even though im sad it puts a smile on my face to know even in the worst of times things can and will get better...great write thanks for posting

[Dezzyray]

i like this alot! it's so happy :3

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

I love this!
"though the sky is gray,
the sun is sure to come."
Great write.

[toniwilliamsga]

i really like this its beautiful

[Silent Knight]

This is so beautiful. I really love your poetry. Its so optimistic.

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

I like it.
Really good.

[Chelsea]

This is a cute poem! I like how you talk about nature but also it has a lot more meaning than just that!
though the sky is gray,
the sun is sure to come.
wen you face your darkest days,
Those lines are so uplifting! And so true! Life may be bleak and grey but there are some sunny days just around the corner! I enjoy how your phrased this. A little spelling mistake wen- when
I like how you then go into another example of night being let by stars! Very cool!
remember,
the night will come lighting the world with stars.
the cycle, of disaster turned victory.....
it, is truly beautiful.
Those lines are so clever! Just had to say that! disaster turn to victory- how very poetic!
I really enjoyed this piece.
A few suggestions I may make…..
The flow is a bit broken. So try changing words/ adding some. Just try it and read aloud! That way you can see if there’s flow! Also capital letters! I would suggest you use them!!
Other than that a very nice poem! Good job,keep up the awesome writing!

[Diomaz]

I do like it, especially the part about stars, (space related words really hit a soft spot with me xD) there is an evident lack of capitals mind you, and its "when" not "wen" although it was probably just a measily typo.

But I enjoyed it nontheless, a quick read :D

[.:Lu:.]

Lol, it's pretty good. I'm posting a bit of poetry, but I'm gonna add a story along with my books.