what you wanted

what you wanted

A Poem by capn_bribri

 is this what you wanted to see me cry because thats what you got here i am wanting to die when your with her i find my razor never to deep to see me cry well thats what you got

© 2011 capn_bribri


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I like abstract things. This is unusual. The Grammar police would flame it,
but given the subject matter, its perfect. The wording was perfect and
adds to the intensity of the situation. There is this frantic chaos.
The energy is frightening. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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capn_bribri
capn_bribri

kent, WA



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Im 17 and when im not shy im really hyper . I have 7 peircings my snake bites , tongue , both sides of my nose and gauges (: I live in washington and no not washington DC just plain old washington whe.. more..

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