Brian (february 21, 2009)

It was a musing to a boy I liked

Hold my hand

One day you'll understand 

That I don't mean to be blunt

Or act like a stupid little b***h

It's just when I look you in the eye

I melt inside 

And get all silly in the head

Thats around the time

When they take you away

I want to beg you to stay

But its not like your mine

i just have to try not to cry

Even though it makes me so blue

My heart yearns to tell you

My head finds a need to expel you

From all thoughts that my cause my heart to grow fonder 

Now I ponder:

Could there be a way 

That, maybe, just maybe

You feel the same

That the silences we share

Are because we both want to cherish what little time we have

Before someone nabs you away

Or causes me to stray

That both our hearts quicken in time

Just before we see each other 

That the slumbering butterflies

That never seem to wake

Can make both of our bodies shake

When ever we near each other

Could it be my darling

That I love you and you love me

And that in our own twisted little world

We're meant to be?

Author's Note

I know its really rhymie lol

Reviews

[lifesanexcursion]

"My heart yearns to tell you
My head finds a need to expel you"

I love those two lines. Very well written

[Mauricio Montoya]

Comes together well, especially the rhyme in this piece
Great job well done.

[Miss Coral]

The beginning was a bit weak, but holy cow... towards the middle you just held on and kept on growing strong. Excellent job.

[Elaine]

Oh it's sooo cute lol. i love it. great job.