My Heart of Ice

My Heart of Ice

A Poem by ★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★

The result of a broken heart...


It is cold,
My heart of ice.

It feels with the emotion
Of a lifeless stone,
Burns with the intensity
Of an Arctic night.
My heart of ice.

Twisted in your hands,
Tortured with your cruelty,
Until it is unrecognizable,
Then left in the cold to suffer.
My heart of ice.

With time the wounds heal,
Leaving it scarred and hardened,
It freezes over and is stronger,
Yet could still shatter at any moment.
My heart of ice.

It sympathizes with the empathy
Of a breathless statue,
Loves with the passion,
Of a motionless corpse.
My heart of ice.

It is callous,
My heart of ice.

© 2010 ★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★

Author's Note

★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★
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Great words you picked I like this heaps go on mate :')

Posted 11 Months Ago

Very nice ..Enjoyed reading this well done :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

Heart of ice? wow, that's deep. Nice writing!

Posted 1 Year Ago

honestly speaking i love it it touched my heart amazingly written keep it up!! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

i love this, it truely touched me...big ups to you

Posted 4 Years Ago

wow such an emotional read. nicely presented

Posted 4 Years Ago

I love this piece you show some great skill here 'burns with the intensity of the arctic night' is an amazing idea and image. What you capture so perfectly is the strength and weakness of the ice which in turn is the strength and weakness of the person, so true because there are always good and bad days. A really fantastic poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago

I like your analogies - "emotion of a lifeless stone, intensity of an Arctic night, empathy of a breathless statue, passion of a motionless corpse"....this is brilliant work!!

Posted 5 Years Ago

i can feel the's so sad..full of emotions..i liked it when you started the poem as >>>it is cold...and ended it with>>>my heart of ice.

it's really nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is quite the powerful read here. I like what you had to say.
I can feel the emotions you put into this.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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11 Reviews
Added on January 1, 2010
Last Updated on July 13, 2010
Tags: Broken heart, ice, heart, bitter, sad, cruel, heartless, poem, metaphors


★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★
★ Aeryn Harmonica Truckfinn ★

Smalltown, WI

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