Down the Drain.

Down the Drain.

A Poem by Peach

Gag me with a tooth brush.

Smell goods on a stick.

Dead cats in the shower.

Sudsy bar.

Green mask lift my stress.

Birds nest needs loving.

Strengthen my enamel.

Another day down the drain.

© 2009 Peach


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One of the most unique original poems at the cafe. Thanks for sharing your talent

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, this is wonderful
know that feeling
well expressed and said.
Great short poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow i really like how you write so different and unique and so full of meaninggg!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Your poem had so much meaning in those few words! I loved it! It was really well written! It was fantastic! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like these little short poems you write. They hold a lot of meaning, but it is kind of disturbing, but that is what gives it its charm. keep writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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You are the one with talent when it comes to writing, dear.
This poem is amazing, to say the least. It is short, creative and unique, but yet it is a tad bit...disturbing (in a good way, of course).
Lovely in its own way.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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