sagebrush moons

sagebrush moons

A Poem by CarolinaBlu

 

sagebrush moons
 
 “time as he grows old teaches many lessons.”
  
~ aeschylus (525-456 bc), greek soldier & playwright ~
 
so says the mother of mothers 
 
 
                  as much as my tears bled throughout 
 squalor still refuses enough of a score disturbed
 
hunger pains of unanswered saulies prayed
 stopped buoyantly hashing clenched teeth
 
                                      crucifying
                     film scars refreshed
 
                while appending doom congregates
but never ever kept among sagebrush moons
 
brine tears & sage shall clean out any ghost
                      so says the mother of mothers 
 
bloodshot roadmaps led nowhere as i followed my gaze
    to know, no reflections concentrates this late in time
 
yet the hours of darkness still sifted an alpenglow dawn
            the cynosure of my once upon a time sacrosanct eyes
 
 
 
 
marlene elisabeth lennon © 2oo8
 

© 2008 CarolinaBlu


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sorry i took so long to answer - computer blew up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


incredible vivid poetry, my apologies for not coming by sooner to read.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Hey very nice write. I had to read it a couple of times but it came into focus as I understood more and moreof your poem as i read it. Thanks for creating and sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I hesite to comment as free form is not really to my liking I found your writing to be obscure and I was uanble to understand what you were trying to say Of course the fault may lie with me As I am an old fashioned rhyme and meter poet

Posted 15 Years Ago


tense confusion -
there have been pros &
cons of say vs says -
& yes, i agree with you

look up saulie - it may
refine your definition

thank you for your comments.

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A well crafted poem, a pleasure to read your poetry.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago



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