Aurora Borealis

It's on my bucket list as is penning a reasonable sonnet. I don't try these often.

In close cupped hands I hold a golden wish,

I kiss my thumbs, set free so it might fly.

My wish to gaze enchanted in the nights

by spirits as they dance across the sky

I'd marvel at the sight of Northern Lights

that sashay softly, swirl and glow bright green.

And then pinch-pleated curtains made from silk

that roll effusing hues of purple sheen.

Aurora, Roman Goddess of the dawn,

bring forth your lavish riches don't be shy.

Grant me one boon to kneel in front of you

and witness this first hand before I die.

Enrich my soul, delight me I implore,

don't leave me disappointed wanting more.

Reviews

[Neville]

I have never attempted one of these .. I've never dared to .. but you here my friend have done the sacred sonnet proud .. Its on my bucket list too .. went to Iceland a year or two back specifically as ya do to see them .. but missed em by ten minutes or so ........................ Neville

[Chris Shaw]

I don't do many of these Neville. They are too difficult. I can remember this one taking an age to do. Thank you for letting it breathe again.

Chris

[W. Barrett Munn]

Shakespeare be damned. We now have a new sonnet mistress to take his place,

Must be a British kind of thing,
Well done, Chris

Winston

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Winston so much. I don't think you will find many sonnets in my catalogue of work. Far too time consuming :) I appreciate you.

Chris

[Ranger Kessel]

I lived in Michigan as a child and they used to put barium in the atmosphere to enhance the viewing for science. They are spectacular. I hope you get to see them. I wish you could have shared my experience. You will. Nice write.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ranger. I appreciate your comments.

Chris

[Ranger Kessel]

Any time. I always enjoy your writing.

[Moonie]

"And then pinch-pleated curtains made from silk
that roll effusing hues of purple sheen."--favourite lines from this creative piece. Seeing the northern lights are on my bucket list too(as is visiting a lot of other interesting places), but the arctic has always fascinated me, since it eludes such a beautiful, and mysterious vibe, and has remained untouched from human intervention for a very long time.

[Chris Shaw]

I think the Northern Lights appeal to many, many people. I think there are lots of bucket lists which have them on their list. Thank you for your review Moon's Fairest Child. You are very welcome here.

Chris

[Norman 223]

For us in the southern part of England, this is a denied spectacle, Chris. but Scotland isn't TOO far away, so your wish can be more than a dream. Loved your description of the swirling celestial pallette.

N.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Norman, hadn't thought about Scotland.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

I have the same wish. I want to see the Northern Lights. Would be a amazing site. Thank you Christine for sharing the poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

hello Coyote, then I hope your wish is granted too. Thank you so much for your response.

read morehello Coyote, then I hope your wish is granted too. Thank you so much for your response.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[KeeD]

I often want to experience beautiful things in my life because I know they can change me, inspire me and help me grow into a better person. Your poem is one of these beautiful things. It's a got a soft beautiful flow and it connects the reader to the event itself, captures him/her and fascinates. Great write.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Kee. Happy that you enjoyed this poem.

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

I truly believe that if you wish for something with all your heart, the wish will most definitely comes true.
And I will be waiting for the spectacular poem you will write after you experience Aurora Borealis. All the best.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you M. Yes if I get to see it, the least I can do is write about it.

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

And it will be as usual a breathtakingly beautiful poem.

[Misterr Remeat]

Very awesome poem. I've seen the northern lights on many occasions, and you've captured them beautifully!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for your kind response.

Chris

[Richard🖌]

Ah, Dear Chris,
I love the imagery you’ve gifted us through the wondrously vivid, beautiful descriptives of your Sonnet, your hallmark smooth flow of syntax, and such striking word choices, also, touched my poetically imaginative heart … gorgeous poeting from You, as usual.
Though, I have not yet witnessed this miracle of nature in person, I have been privileged to enjoy several documentaries featuring videos of the Aurora Borealis' undulating, glowing beauty.

Thank you for sharing the wonders of this glorious phenomenon through your splendid poetry! ⁓ Richard : )

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Richard, how lovely to read your response, I am so glad that you enjoyed the read. So we both have in common a desire to see the real Aurora Borealis. Like you, I have only seen this wonder on tv. So it's on my bucket list. Yes, I thought it was about time I uploaded an image for my avatar, so thank you for that gorgeous compliment!

Warm regards to you :))

[Richard🖌]

Such a sweet delight it is, Chris. : )
Messaging.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks for advice re edits Richard

[Richard🖌]

You are ever-so warmly welcome, Chris. : )
It is always my joy to help a friend.

[Chris Shaw]

:)) ...........