An Unlikely Drummer

An Unlikely Drummer

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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(some people stay with you forever, they just have that ability)

"
Make no mistake,
eccentricity can fascinate
as well as captivate.

She was quirky, a trifle off track,
yet when I reflect on her
she materialises
in a fusion of fondness.
A face with no name,
her unlikely fame
a source of entertainment.

Her eccentricity a pure delight,
sightings in Hyde Park at weekends,
she stokes up the crowd,
like embers, she ignites.

Surrounded by locals,
inquisitive tourists, she gives of her best,
banging a beat on her do it yourself drum kit.
Her zest for life can't be contained in
empty biscuit tins or thirsty wooden barrels.

She resorts to an assortment of songs.
An old medley in her gravelly voice,
grey hair hanging in tangles,
past her prime, let alone time.

She sings of nightingales,
of keeping the home fires burning,
of Mother Kelly's doorstep.
She sang them all,
her audience enthralled by her enthusiasm.

Nothing like a London knees up
to please the punters.
A fanfare for my English roots,
those drum sticks banged, rolled and clicked.
Where she got her energy from
was beyond me, maybe that flask of tea 
was of a stronger brew?

Lady with no name, what joy you gave.
May you forever play in the corridors
of the minds of the many
who still to this day
remember you.

© 2019 Chris Shaw


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Are you sitting comfortably? Then i'll begin.
Sorry for the dramatic start, but I am guessing this will be a long review, seeing as I have a little experience of quirky. :)
I really like the fact that she isn't named, making her anyone, but still very much someone special.
She certainly left her mark on you, as your homage to her attests to, which is all she would hope for, to be remembered for doing what she loves, in her own inimat...innimat...unique way. :)
Those who tread an unworn path, battle more than just making a clearing for others to follow, they inspire us to follow our own path and beat the drum to our passions tune.
Whoever she may be, I salute her, and you too, for seeing what she was all about.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

I love quirky, I love free thinkers and those who walk off the beaten track. Those who may be a bit.. read more



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As I've said many times, you have the most amazing assortment of ideas for things to write about. But this one really hits my heart. I've always been fond of quirky people. I've always ended up friends with the oddballs. I love your portrait, so honest & frank, yet gentle & loving. Perfectly balanced portrait of how the unusual can be so intriguing. Great details, too! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Thank you Margie. She was a treasure, that's for sure. Fondest to you.

Chris
First of all, this is a very well written piece of work that you have here. The next thing I'd like to say is that the flow of it was pleasantly smooth and not once did I find myself feeling I had gotten over any bumps. The rhythm and nature of the poem feels rather upbeat, just like the drum and drummer.

I'm glad you also haven't given this "person" a name, leaves it a fine wee mystery but also allows for a general interpretation and even gives way to opportunity of being even more relatable. Absolutely love how you portrayed this particular character, and I look forward to reading now some of your other works.

Hope you are having a splendid New Year so far,

~CarthageThorne


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Hello Carthage Thorne and welcome to my page. Thank you for your thoughtful review, gratefully recei.. read more
Chris I love the jaunt and the freedom of this woman who you paint with such colorful brushstrokes. Great title too- for she was a true artist- not fitting into anyone’s imposed niche. I can tell from your lovely tribute how much she, her improvised drums, her gravelly voice, her zest and eccentricity meant to you and so many others. Your imagery helps me to see a place I’ve never been but often imagined. So joyously and uniquely English. Very relatable though as I’ve seen and admired so many street artists on the streets and in the subway tunnels of NYC all my life. Cheers to you and cheers to the Lady Drummer! P.S. A little flask always helps the music flow- ha!


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Dear Annette. I have long thought that flask had something stronger than tea in it :) This old lady .. read more
The freedom of different without care or doubt is what makes life a exciting and adventurous place- the dare without a care- oh how i love drums, flutes, any musical instrument that brings your in er child alive played from the heart and soul- showing your true self- sounds wonderful you brought her to life- 🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Dear Kelly, once you had seen this old lady perform, you would never be able to forget her. She was .. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

5 Years Ago

Im sure she was 🌹
"eccentricity can fascinate
as well as captivate."
I so agree! There's definitely something about it..and the power some have over captivating others through their talents.
This one's lovely. I like how all your writes have something different in them which makes reading you all the more interesting for me :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

I'm so pleased you like the variety in my writes Dr Y. I do try to find topics of interest. Thank yo.. read more
I have loved the street musicians in my lifetime. More in Europe than the USA. I use to go to Santa Cruz, California a long time ago. Always talented people playing for tips. I enjoyed the poem. Made me see the performer. Thank you Chris for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

She was certainly a performer Coyote. Very entertaining to watch. Thank you for sharing too.
.. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Chris.
Are you sitting comfortably? Then i'll begin.
Sorry for the dramatic start, but I am guessing this will be a long review, seeing as I have a little experience of quirky. :)
I really like the fact that she isn't named, making her anyone, but still very much someone special.
She certainly left her mark on you, as your homage to her attests to, which is all she would hope for, to be remembered for doing what she loves, in her own inimat...innimat...unique way. :)
Those who tread an unworn path, battle more than just making a clearing for others to follow, they inspire us to follow our own path and beat the drum to our passions tune.
Whoever she may be, I salute her, and you too, for seeing what she was all about.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

I love quirky, I love free thinkers and those who walk off the beaten track. Those who may be a bit.. read more
Love your last stanza here, This is so well written and so well expressed

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Your visit Brandie Jade much appreciated. Many thanks.

Chris
going to see someone you love is brilliant and stays with you for ever. to be able to express it in poetry shows how much it means to you. I see you love and devotion and its stunning. big fan of this poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Good morning duck and quack quack. Thank you for your visit. Pleased you enjoyed my lines about that.. read more

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