Riddle

She felt something crawling up her leg and when she came to she saw that it was an small lady bug she pick up the lady bug in from her finger it flew away she looked around confused wondering to her self where am I an how did I get here as she pick her self up off the ground she couldn't help but notice all the trees she were surrounded by looking up to the sky saying to her self I have to get home to my family then out of nowhere an strange man appears is something wrong my dear yes I'm cold an hungry an I'm sure my family are very worried he smiled in said I could help you but first you have to complete an riddle she looked at him very upset I don't have time for this in if you want help me then fine I'll just have to keep going until I find my way home he laughed out loud what is so funny don't worry you'll find out an see an when that day come my face you will see she rant as fast as she could she fell to her knees when she realizes she were going in circles she could still here the strange man laughing no this can't be I can't be lost what about my family I know that there looking for me I know ill go back  in talk to the strange man I mean it's just a riddle how bad can it be she walked through the woods searching for him hello hello well well if it isn't Mr's I don't know whom I am or where I am I didn't say that I didn't know who I was why I'm I'm maybe you're right I don't know who I am as I said before I shall not repeat anymore if you ask I can help you but you must solve a riddle okay /your pretty in pale with dirt underneath your nails there's an rip in your tights an your light as an kite your running in circles wondering how you got here just follow the trail you're answer should be very clear okay follow the trail an answer should be very clear when she finally reach the trail she couldn't believe her eyes no no this can't be when she look down to her stomach she saw that her insides where coming out /now that you see its perfectly clear your family and friends don't know that you're here you can cry in weep but it won't make a difference I cut out your stomach and made it a ribbon

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[Inject Positivity]

Hello Cattleya, it's good to be able to visit your writing page. First of all I would suggest you to edit this writing, I don't if you are new to this website but I feel like you are so you might be having problems in editing it. The story has elements in it that wants to reach to the reader but lack presentation making it difficult to read, there are some typing mistakes which I understand...

If you need any help on this please leave a message, I would be glad to help you... I will visit again to your page to read this one...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Cattleya]

Thanks that be great