undesirable

  I  rub your neck when you ask I rant your bath just so you could relax I  wash  your  clothes so  fresh and so clean

    to question my love for you as if it doesn't mean a thing I  cook your dinner hot and ready for you please

   

  you  any way that you wanted me to but when it came to me my needs you made me felt empty  I just

   wanted to hide  so that you couldn't see me because  what  I felt in my heart I couldn't stay mad

   at you  just wish that I were desirable to you  

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

We need to feel love, we need to feel appreciated. I felt the regret in the words. Even a kind giver, they will give-up and escape. Strong flow of emotions. You made the reader understand.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the stream of consciousness style here almost works to show how the hurt feelings pile up...the list of what isn't appreciated...

j.