LOVING

It is about how letting someone go is the best thing

            Love is one of the hardest things to do and say. It is very complicated. It is something that can either make or break a person or people.

            The hardest thing is letting someone, who you really love go. It can either a great or bad thing. It is can be a great thing because you both have new lives and meet new people. It can be a bad thing because the leftover baggage might carry into future relationships. Either way it is something that is really hard to do. By doing that a person can feel a huge sign of relief or a guilty. At the end of day, it is a decision that a person has to live with forever.

            Sometimes those two people fall back in love after they have experienced live a little bit rather they can married and divorced or just date.

                Thanks for listening.

         

Reviews

[Hannah]

You did very well at describing something as abstract as love. The way you get specific gets across your point very well.

[Justin]

thanks :) :) love is complicated to write about, bc there is so many views on it, both positive and negative

[Tabby Mac]

Sound words.Love is complicated like you say. Following ones heart is the only way...sometimes that means making a hard choice...but, it sometimes does come back to you...either way a decision in life we must truly listen for. Don’t settle. True love is worth the wait!
Tabby

[Justin]

thanks :) :) :) love is a two way straight street, it can be an amazing but also end horrible

[B]

I know how you feel
Especially if one is separated from' a lover by a jealous ex by force
But that's all a test
Sometimes it brings two ppl even closer than before
It's all about how true that love is

Great job

[Justin]

thanks, love is a two way street, it can be amazing and also very cruel!!!

[Beyond Our Control]

beautiful you were able to portray how people feel! its rather amazing :) great job :)

[Justin]

thanks :) :) :) sometimes it is the most important thing to do :)

[Loaa Diab]

totally agree with you 👍

[Penelope Voljeti]

There is just one small typo in this (there is a stray word, "is"). Just something small worth mentioning if you're planning on publishing this. I think something that could really improve this would be to add some really concrete imagery - something for the reader to hold onto and relate to directly when reading. I love the idea, and how you went about expanding the concept :)

[Rochelle]

So true but love is what keeps us alive.

[Nila M.]

And yeah, those experiences can definitely bring baggage into future relationships, and most likely will. It's all part of the cost of change.

[Nila M.]

I let a marriage of 12 years go. It was very good thing but still the most difficult thing I have ever done. It's amazing what the human heart can endure through a lifetime. Growth sometimes takes unbelievable sacrifice. And I don't mean this in a negative way, but in the end don't we have to let everything go? I am fortunate an have a great relationship with my ex wife, but you can't help but wonder at all the little pieces you leave behind in your journey through life. I have to believe that at the end of the day it's all for something greater.

[closed]

literary wisdom and insight

imparted by so few words


good poem Justin



-Dream