POISON

POISON

A Story by Justin
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Taking advantage of a person

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Why did you take advantage of me?e

Was I not good enough for you?

Did you love me for just my money?

Was this a little game, so you don't have to face reality?

Was it something that you had planned to do?

Was I an easy target for you bc I left sorry for you?


             You took advantage of me. I almost lost everything bc of you like my friends, family, money, and so on.  You made me do things that I wont normally do because you were able to talk me into them. You tried to shape of the person, who was like you instead of accepting me for me. You didn't like the fact that I was different. You wanted me to be someone who I wasn't. I aint a country boy or anything like that. I am a person who is different. You didn't like the fact I didn't want to have kids right away bc you thought u were ready for them. You also didn't like the fact that I liked harry potter and pokemon. You thought that stuff for kids.

         You wanted me to spend all my money on you instead of myself. I almost had to work two jobs to make sure that we were able to have enough money to pay the bills. You never kept you side of the deal. You wanted me to pay for everything so you could send all your money on yourself and your family but when I wanted to spend money of myself or wanted to get something I really wanted you would get upset.

         You made me turn my back on the person, who were always here for me. I am surprised that they stuck around. That is one of the most selfish thing a person could do to someone.

          You took advantage of my kindness and all the good qualities that make me. You knew that I wont say no to you.

           Thanks for almost taking everything that I worked hard for bc you didn't want to work for anything.


© 2017 Justin



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This is really good! And truthfully? From the sounds of it...you sound like you're much better off without that girl... I know how you feel. And it's horrendous when we go through such things...but it makes us realize what we want - and what we don't want.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Justin

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reading it, that is life we all go through ups and downs, sometimes those downs take more.. read more



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I feel the frustration. It's very good and rings truth in most peoples lives.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Justin

1 Year Ago

thanks :) :) that is life for u lol
I can tell that there is a lot of emotion inside of you. It's obvious that there is power behind these words and I want to see more. Even with the small grammar mistakes, you are still able to convey power and feelling very effectively.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ah, your story hits deep, and honestly it makes me want to cry. The emotion is strong, and oh my heart.
There are a few grammar mistakes, but honestly, I don't even think people would notice them, especially with the amount of feeling you've put into this.
It's raw, and utterly beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Justin

1 Year Ago

thanks :) i am glad it was able to bring the emotion out of u, which is a beautiful thing, thanks ag.. read more
I love how, even though it's sad to say, your story is so relatable to a situation I have lived through. Your words hit deep. You are really talented and keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Justin

1 Year Ago

thanks :) :) it is relatable to so many ppl, it is reality but it humbles all of us
Sounds like a terrible situation. Hopefully nothing like that will ever happen to you again. Part of what makes relationships works is mutual effort and respect. It sounds like she only valued what she wanted and wanted you to change to fit her image. She shouldn't make you feel bad about the things you like. A ton of adults love Harry Potter and Pokemon. If anything, they have larger adult fans than children, because they were fans when the books and games first came out. Stay strong.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Made me remember someone in my past that pretty much did same to me in a different way but hurted just as much, sorry you went through hell with the person but our bad experiences help us in the future become better leaders and gives us something to write a book about, take always the positive out of something negative and you will see the weak areas you gained and replace them with superior ones :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


STORIES BEHIND EYES

1 Year Ago

lol yea right
Justin

1 Year Ago

it was like their were born in a barn lol
STORIES BEHIND EYES

1 Year Ago

Yea pretty much, it's gross honestly lol
Justin, I hope this is all behind you now but I know that it will take sometime to really let go and move forward. I believe going through what you have expressed in your story will ultimately make you a stronger person overall.

Stay strong Justin, and as they say “live & learn”.

Take care & have Faith, it will get better.

Blessings, 🙏
~ hsg

Posted 1 Year Ago


Justin

1 Year Ago

thanks :) it took time, u learn lot about yourself and the ppl who you put around you!!!!
heavenscentgirl1

1 Year Ago

So very true my friend. 👍🙏
Justin

1 Year Ago

yup, if they stay then they were meant too but if they leave they it was a lesson
I think "Poison" is a very fitting title. Hopefully you never go through something like this again. Someone who forces you to do things you don't want, tells you to not do the things you DO want to do, and makes you work so hard to support them does not deserve to be in a relationship. It sounds like a terrible experience, and I hope you're stronger for it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Justin

1 Year Ago

thanks :) it was a very humbling experience, you learn a lot about yourself and other ppl whenever y.. read more
This was really good! I felt all the emotion you were trying to convey in your story. There were a few grammatical errors but those are easily fixable. Other than that, keep up the good work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Justin

1 Year Ago

thanks, it means a lot to have someone review my work and point out things that I wont see, thanks
This is fantastic. One of the better stories I've read on this site. It is just so relatable and honest. Great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Justin

1 Year Ago

thanks :) :) I am glad u can relate to it, I am sure a lot of ppl can relate to it

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