Night Sky of Fall

Night Sky of Fall

A Poem by Justin
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Just a poem about the fall night sky

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The beauty of the night sky

especially this time of year

fall is most amazing time of year

it produces night skys like this

just walk right outside my apartment

I see this image

makes all the negative of the day go away

it tells me that there is beauty in life

regardless of how the day went

grateful to see images like this

night sky like this can turn a negative day into a positive day

the colors of the night sky especially this time of year

are amazing

when you live in a small town

you are able to see images like this

that people in the city

would pay to have pictures of

it is something that us as humans

sometimes take for granted

that is why fall is amazing



© 2017 Justin



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There really is nothing more beautiful then the sky itself. I love your take on nature and the beauty it holds, not enough people have that quality and talent to see the world as you do.

Posted 4 Days Ago


Justin

4 Days Ago

thanks emily :) :) i actually took that picture :)
I couldn't agree more, really enjoyed this

Posted 1 Week Ago


Justin

1 Week Ago

Thanks I actually took that picture!!!
Kasey Miriam

1 Week Ago

beautiful!
Justin

1 Week Ago

Thanks u should see the picture with my poem sunrise
A beautiful photograph has inspired such a piece full of imagery, and creative within the colors. I can clearly see and feel your appreciation of the beauty that surrounds us. Something we oftentimes take for granted. Great job, Justin.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Justin

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks Traci!!! We all take things for granted whether we know it or not!!! I also took that picture.. read more
Started reading the poem, enjoyed it, and then started reading the lines that corresponded with each other & loved it just as much, although Im not sure that was intended.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Justin

2 Weeks Ago

thanks for commenting on it :) :) my intent was to make it creative and have the colors of the words.. read more
fall is my favorite season, and your image and imagery just showed why, Good job!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Justin

4 Weeks Ago

thanks :) that picture was taken right out my apartment
Very inspirational and for a great time like we are in now. May the fall season hear your magical words of love you made for her. :)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Justin

4 Weeks Ago

we are doing art :)
Nancy2Write4You

4 Weeks Ago

art is anything you mentally paint
Justin

4 Weeks Ago

I agree with u a trillion percent :)
Such beautiful imagery; so full of pathos. I come from a small town, and it really is beautiful to see the seemingly endless forests with their leaves changing color. It seems like the whole world is shifting.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Justin

4 Weeks Ago

thanks :) :) it was perfect timing for the picture, I agree with everything that u have said :)
Justin, you have painted a beautiful picture with the words you’ve shared here ~ almost as beautiful as the actual picture you’ve posted to enhance this piece. I also like the presentation of the different colored lines.

Take care and enjoy a beautiful day my friend.

Blessings,
~ hsg

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Justin

4 Weeks Ago

thanks :) :) :) I actually took that picture right outside of my apartment, it was perfect timing!!!
heavenscentgirl1

4 Weeks Ago

Yes, timing is everything! That is a very nice picture, thanks for sharing it with us.
Justin

4 Weeks Ago

thanks :) :) it enjoy taking pictures
Nice use of imagery here, I would expand on it. Don't be hesitant to get deeper into the descriptions of the trees, the branches, the leaves...give us more to run wild with. I would also dabble with using punctuation to separate some of the lines into stanzas. It will give the reader a chance to pause and reflect!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Justin

4 Weeks Ago

thanks :) :) I could expand it a lil bit :)

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