What Control?

What Control?

A Poem by catney123
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This is something I wrote last night at 11:44 when I could not sleep; this is the product. Since I could not sleep last night and was out of control and still wide awake I am believing I am Hypomania.

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Sometimes I get out of control,
I can not control my emotions,
Or my actions,
I try to but can not,
Sometimes I feel to wide awake to sleep,
I regret it in the morning,
Feeling tired and wore out,
I try to sleep,
But I am to restless,
When I get out of control,
I do and say things I normally do not,
But think about saying or doing them,
I try to stay in control,
But sometimes I feel happy,
Like I am at the top of the world,
When I get angry,
I can not control what I do,
Or even say,
When I get sad or depressed,
I do not think,
I let it out with not control,
Because sometimes I get out of control,
And because I feel to wide awake to sleep.

© 2014 catney123


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catney123
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Nice piece of writing.
Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well done control is something hard to find or keep hold of. Fox-

Posted 9 Years Ago


good read, you put everyone's questions on paper, good work. xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is amazing you've depicted everyone's thinking and questions to himself why ? why can't i ? sometimes all thoughts and mysteries and memories come back at an instant at night. keep up the good work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


catney123

9 Years Ago

Thank you, it is not that they always come to me but when they do they can be during the day as well.. read more
Wow, very powerful write. I love this poem, it's relate able. Nicely penned.

Kaze~

Posted 9 Years Ago


catney123

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much on the review.
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
I enjoyed it, I can relate to those feelings so well, sometimes I struggle to put into words how I feel but you did it so perfectly. I love this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


catney123

9 Years Ago

Thank it was not hard at the time but if I where to try to write something like that another time it.. read more

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Added on April 25, 2014
Last Updated on April 25, 2014
Tags: Poetry, Myself, Control, Sleep

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catney123

Orchard, NE



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