Losin' It

Losin' It

A Poem by LittleEye:)
"

i am srsly losin' it...

"

losin' it.

i'm losin' it
cause this life
just isnt givin me a break
cant anything ever be easy?
NO cause it
is all sweat and tears
and pain
thats life it's
never gonna change!

chorus:

this life is tough
and i cant breath
its crushing me
when will it stop?
cause i'm losing it!
i feel like its the end
when will my prince
come and save me?

as i cry
agian in my room
over you
i wonder y
and i talk to God
i ask him why
why is life
difficult?

i think to
myself
if this life
was easy
i would not hurt.

but
the pain and the hurt
makes us who we are
the strong beings
we are
we are strong
even when we feel week
and helpless

cause

chorus:
this life is tough
and i cant breath
its crushing me
when will it stop?
cause i'm losing it!
i feel like its the end
when will my prince
come and save me?

why! oh why
im screaming my heart out
i need to know why
cause im
losing my mind!
i need to know!
why...

this life is
to much
im giving up
im on the edge
where are u
to come save me
from jumping?

chorus:
this life is tough
and i cant breath
its crushing me
when will it stop?
cause i'm losing it!
i feel like its the end
when will my prince
come and save me?
come and save me... please...

please
this is all i ask
save me please
oh please save me
from this hell....
im fading fast...

© 2009 LittleEye:)


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I loved this writing a lot..
I dont think life is hard,though we all come to think so..
Life is what we feel from the inside..its a an inner feeling and not outside events..so all depends on you
I you know who you really are,where you are going,and how far you could go,and at what speed..
If you are content with the simple things that you know you could get,if you are happy with small things..
if you are not alluded by your thoughts that you could get the impossible and so you keep running all time..
If you know where you are headed and when is last stop to go where you could go no further..
If you know that its not a rat race,and happiness is from the inside and not a gift given to you by others..
If you you knew how to live it well ,and play the game well.knew your limitations,and knew that few things
in life could bring all the happiness to you that you dreamed of...then you will not see it so hard..
it will be so lovely so easy to live..and above all if you loved yourself and loved all around you ,gave love to all
tried to give a smile and looked for what others need ..you will have a different feel of life,you never thought to feel
that was a lovely write ,it gave me so much thoughts..

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Woah. Nice, this was the only song lyric writing that has EVER gotten my attention and heart..NICE!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love this. I can definetly understand and it made me think about many things that I experience day to day. Great piece! xD

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a song right?
I agree with the message.
And the words you use.
I like the chorus the best.
These few lines in particular:
"this life is tough
and i cant breath
its crushing me
when will it stop?
cause i'm losing it!"
I think they are the most relatable.
I sang this in a Papa Roach kind of style.
I can see them singing this.
Great write.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this writing a lot..
I dont think life is hard,though we all come to think so..
Life is what we feel from the inside..its a an inner feeling and not outside events..so all depends on you
I you know who you really are,where you are going,and how far you could go,and at what speed..
If you are content with the simple things that you know you could get,if you are happy with small things..
if you are not alluded by your thoughts that you could get the impossible and so you keep running all time..
If you know where you are headed and when is last stop to go where you could go no further..
If you know that its not a rat race,and happiness is from the inside and not a gift given to you by others..
If you you knew how to live it well ,and play the game well.knew your limitations,and knew that few things
in life could bring all the happiness to you that you dreamed of...then you will not see it so hard..
it will be so lovely so easy to live..and above all if you loved yourself and loved all around you ,gave love to all
tried to give a smile and looked for what others need ..you will have a different feel of life,you never thought to feel
that was a lovely write ,it gave me so much thoughts..

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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All of you that have known me since 2007 have seen me grow up through my work, i just want to say thx for all of the reviews and the comments you guys help a lot more..

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