Alphabet of Eternity

Alphabet of Eternity

A Poem by Carole

The alphabet of eternity

Bountiful strength for the journey

Wisdom for the teachable

Knowledge for the reachable

 

Immeasurable life for those that seek it

Indomitable hope for those that need it

Incalculable love without measure

An unparalleled and costly treasure

 

Words that transform multitudes of lives

Supernaturally sent from majestic scribes

Miraculous healing for the wounded soul

Declarations of faith, making hearts whole

© 2009 Carole


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Mac this is out of sight. It is wonderful and then some. Girl you have jumped three levels over my head. I can read this over and over all day long. The imagery flows with the words and the words capture the attention of the reader and holds it in plain view for all to see. The ending stanza is without question a summing up and direction to go all in one. This really is a great write and read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful. You seem to be describing the Bible.
Thank you for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha

Posted 16 Years Ago


Absolutely beautiful. I love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Carole I think this might just be the most beautiful and inspiring pieces I have read In a very long time and possibly ever on here. I would however change the title and first line to attract more readers to see the beauty and truth of this message. Something like this maybe.

Now and Throughout Eternity
Bountiful strength for the journey
Wisdom for the teachable
Knowledge for the reachable

Stiil absolutely beautiful read.
Hugs Debby

Posted 16 Years Ago


A hopeful message well presented in rhyming couplets I am aa old fashioned formalist and it gives me pleasure to see structured poetry

Posted 16 Years Ago


"just another poem"?! come on, now, this little power-packed piece deserves a better line than that!!! This is so great, beautiful and refreshing. I love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I keep finding these little treasures of yours on your page! I love reading your work. This poem is absolutely stunning.

Miraculous healing for the wounded soul
Declarations of faith, making hearts whole

Those lines brought so much warmth into my heart when I read them. What a beautiful little treasure this poem is. I'm so glad that I came across it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful.....Takes my breath away. This is way more than just another poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this.."Declarations of faith, making hearts whole"
Your vocabulary amazes me! I've found that words are hard for me to find, beyond what I always say and write! You have a way of exressing things so that the reader must think. That's what we are supposed to do! I love this......glad I came by!



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its difficult to take so many large (in a syllable sense) words and have a fluid poem.

It does what it is ment to without any rough transition.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I loved this poem. The bible is so close to my heart and I was close to tears reading it. Thank you so much for this awesome write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 5, 2008
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Carole
Carole

Rio Rancho, NM



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