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Unquenchable Light

Unquenchable Light

A Poem by Carole


Unquenchable Light



Fire can’t quench it

Trials can’t bench it

Resistance can’t change it

Hate can’t destroy it


It’s here to stay!


Drama doesn’t move it

Railroading doesn’t budge it

Conspiracy doesn’t change it

Cheap tricks don’t rearrange it


It’s here to stay!


Trials strengthen it

Persecution compliments it

Tribulation undergirds it

Joy illuminates it



It's here to stay!



Unquenchable fortitude in the plight

Unbenchable attitude empowered in the fight

Set on fire with the eruption of light

Displayed on the mountain top


Brighter than Bright







© 2009 Carole

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" Indelible "

We have to be there
with our faith...
we have to believe in craziness an oppression ...victory an defeat
in a nutshell try to get our flesh to line up with the spirit
God will leave us never....
we must endure

Love this...really worked for me today


Posted 10 Years Ago

3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


You are the light of the world. So shine brightly for the burning will not consume you; no more than the bush consumed Moses or the furnace consumed the friends of Daniel. The fire within burns greater than the flames of torment. The ashes of sorrow will be dust beneath your feet; tears dried with the down of angel's wings. Many waters cannot quench Love; nor can the floods drown it and Truth by any other name, Love, Light, Joy, Life or simply The Way is still true. There is an open door to everyone that knocks and a guiding light for everyone that seeks. God did not say, "Seek My Face" in vain, but rather, " I am the Light of the world. He who follows me will not walk in darkness but has the light of life." Jn. 8:12 A wonderful poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love everything about this piece. The colors, the words, but most of all the truth behind the words. A truly inspiring piece. God Bless.
Hugs Debby

Posted 9 Years Ago

Lovley poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Many different views, making the subject of the piece fit perfectly! Great work on this


Posted 9 Years Ago

The human soul is a wonderful thing and your powerful description of just how deep it can go is just incredible. Truly amazing work

Posted 10 Years Ago

Beautifully written poem. There' is nothing grander. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is so true. Through everything positive and negative we grow closer to our Savior. It's wonderful that it works that way, and we don't allow Satan to pull us down. (Of course there have been times I have allowed him to do that. . . I don't want to sound like I'm some perfect saint.)
This was just what I needed to hear to get my flame burning a little brighter this evening. Thank you, Carole. This is a wonderful piece.

Many blessings,


Posted 10 Years Ago

You have a great grasp of faith's truest beauty and strength. You capture it very well with your words. Bringing to life the depth of the most awesome power.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I liked the meaning behind this very much but I have to admit the constant changing of font and color took a bit of the underlying tones and meanings away for me. The use of imagery and words was wonderful though. Nice write,


Posted 10 Years Ago

I love this light and I can tell by your write you do too. AMEN to such a beautiful write and that glorious light!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on May 14, 2008
Last Updated on February 8, 2009



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