Dark side of Dating

Dark side of Dating

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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A different side of online dating

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I met a girl who hated the world

She gave me sex to save her soul

She was a dirty, crazy, wild b***h

But she swore that sex was her niche

A part of me couldn’t help but wonder

How proud is the woman they call her mother

She’s serving up mind blowing free sex

Just so she can erase thoughts of her ex

To my liking I didn’t complain

Until she came and screamed his name

It was an exceptional one night stand

It gave a night off to my lonely hand

Met her at two, fucked her at three

She released her rage while grinding on me

Welcome to the world of online dating

Where the next lonely soul is ready and waiting

 


© 2015 AaronFreitas



Author's Note

AaronFreitas
Probably a little mean but truth for many souls out there searching for "love"

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Aaron - its a sad comment on modern life but the online aspect was preceeded by the speed dating and before that the singles bars scene. I'd have to ask someone older what was before that.
Sadness and lonliness can make us do so many things we wouldn't do or comtemplate - its as if it moves the moral compass into the left field.
This is a superb social commentary on the human condition as it embraces modern technologies.
If you didnt care - you wouldnt write about it my friend - it speaks volumes...

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yeah I feel like some things I witness... things I hear about, it made it something to talk about. .. read more



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"Welcome to the world of online dating

Where the next lonely soul is ready and waiting"

Powerful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend... if you ever try it you'll understand completely lol
Wow

I did not know that persons used the internet for those things

I always thought that the internet was for writing poetry, research, novels and online shopping

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Lol you can use the internet for anything and everything. I am talking like dating sites like match.. read more
You have captured brutally the darker side of on-line dating in this tightly narrated piece Aaron.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you John... for some reason it wouldn't let me name it Online dating... but yeah it's funny be.. read more
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613
Although the topic of this irks me to my core, it was very well written!

- Brittney

Posted 2 Years Ago


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613

2 Years Ago

Sure thing! (:
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

You truly are a great friend :)
613

2 Years Ago

Haha. Because this piece is really old? Writing is writing, man! No matter how old.
If we all.. read more
(It gave a night off to my lonely hand)
Did your hand even deserve a night off?

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

haha probably not :) This made me laugh... I almost forgot all about this write until Bill commente.. read more
They may be searching but this is lust not love and our lust is the most difficult to overcome its hard to say no to raging hormones but with God's help you can and though this is mostly the norm in our world today its disrespectful to both men and women nice rhyming flow

Bill

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes definitely lust my friend! For a little while I tried the online dating... met too many women t.. read more
W R Stowe

2 Years Ago

There is always the Philippines perhaps I could be of some assistance there
And truth be told, there are people who do such things, mistaking sex for love, mixing it together...The crazy things we do to fill the emptiness inside us that eats us away when we are idle. We must realize that until we learn to love ourselves wholly and unconditionally, we cannot love others and we will do things that are not love, that hurt ourselves and others.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes it is true.... I showed this to my youngest sister and she laughed so hard... said I nailed it r.. read more
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Gee
Great subject.Never tried it but I suppose for a lot of men,and perhaps women it's just a way of hunting down a shag.Enjoyed the read Aaron

Posted 2 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Gee.... I think it's very interesting the way people do approach it. I'm not saying peopl.. read more
Gee

2 Years Ago

You're welcome
I think this poem is sad. Mostly because it is true. But also find that not all online dating is like this. We're just people.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Not all online dating is like this.... it's just a dark side of online dating. People will always t.. read more
we all have our "escape" our way to forget, just for a moment, the pain of the past, present, and dimness of future.. unfortunately for some, sex is one of them.. online dating is just another way to make this easier and more accessible to others.. I like your honest, raw approach to this subject.. it also has a little sarcastic, dry humor sprinkled in there for good measure and was done very skillfully..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Haha thanks... it's definitely a different piece but I feel for some people it is the truth. With o.. read more
AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

I admit, I am a runner usually.. I hide from it for sure. keep my walls up and never even consider t.. read more
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I'm sorry to you are going through that. I think I am kind of an all in or nothing person. It is j.. read more

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