Dark side of Dating

Dark side of Dating

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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A different side of online dating

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I met a girl who hated the world

She gave me sex to save her soul

She was a dirty, crazy, wild b***h

But she swore that sex was her niche

A part of me couldn’t help but wonder

How proud is the woman they call her mother

She’s serving up mind blowing free sex

Just so she can erase thoughts of her ex

To my liking I didn’t complain

Until she came and screamed his name

It was an exceptional one night stand

It gave a night off to my lonely hand

Met her at two, fucked her at three

She released her rage while grinding on me

Welcome to the world of online dating

Where the next lonely soul is ready and waiting

 

© 2015 AaronFreitas


Author's Note

AaronFreitas
Probably a little mean but truth for many souls out there searching for "love"

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Aaron - its a sad comment on modern life but the online aspect was preceeded by the speed dating and before that the singles bars scene. I'd have to ask someone older what was before that.
Sadness and lonliness can make us do so many things we wouldn't do or comtemplate - its as if it moves the moral compass into the left field.
This is a superb social commentary on the human condition as it embraces modern technologies.
If you didnt care - you wouldnt write about it my friend - it speaks volumes...

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Yeah I feel like some things I witness... things I hear about, it made it something to talk about. .. read more



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A mirror of the uglier part of what humans have to do to fill that hole inside of their soul that keeps churning and stirring.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Yeah definitely a different take on online dating... I can't speak for all but some people online da.. read more
Wow...
I like it, but I hope that it's not personal...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Nope not personal... thanks for the review
♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

You're welcome, Mr.. lol
Aaron - its a sad comment on modern life but the online aspect was preceeded by the speed dating and before that the singles bars scene. I'd have to ask someone older what was before that.
Sadness and lonliness can make us do so many things we wouldn't do or comtemplate - its as if it moves the moral compass into the left field.
This is a superb social commentary on the human condition as it embraces modern technologies.
If you didnt care - you wouldnt write about it my friend - it speaks volumes...

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Yeah I feel like some things I witness... things I hear about, it made it something to talk about. .. read more
Interesting, I didn't expect that. Sadly, there are lonely people like this...none that I know, but some who look so desperately for that lovers touch, yet haven't moved on from their ex or past loves. I feel bad for those who lower their standards and self respect for just a one-night stand. To use sex just to feel and compare to their last lover. I feel sex is such a special thing, but it should happen in the right time, right moment, not just because one is lonely or sad. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Yeah I have met some people and know some people who are on dating sites and they take advantage of .. read more

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