For my Daughter

For my Daughter

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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For my daughter Zoe on her sixth birthday

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I think of you and how amazing you are

Six years ago today you were born

My beautiful little angel, my baby girl

You made me the luckiest father in the world

 

You always seem to amaze me

In everything you ever do

You always make me smile

I admit, I am so proud of you

 

You are so much like me

In so many ways

Your temper and competitiveness

Straight from my DNA

 

Today on your sixth birthday

I was so happy to be with you

I wanted to tell the world

Just how much I love you

 

For my daughter Zoe 

 


© 2015 AaronFreitas



Author's Note

AaronFreitas
I wrote this for my daughter on her birthday

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dan
Aaron, So many poems posted on WC are about fantasy, dreams and pain...this is so warm and fuzzy (a GOOD thing) it brought a tear to my eye. So genuine and raw, nothing pre-processed or overdone...just pure love from a dad to his precious daughter. I hope Zoe is as proud of her daddy as daddy is of her. Beautiful writing, my friend. take care...dan

Posted 1 Year Ago


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AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you Dan :) It's been a year since I wrote it but I'm still just as proud of her. She turned .. read more



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A beautiful poem for your daughter.
"Today on your sixth birthday
I was so happy to be with you
I wanted to tell the world
Just how much I love you"
Thank you Aaron for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Absolutely beautiful and the most powerful, purest form of love is between a parent and child. I loved reading this, and hope she had the best 6th birthday. Good vibes to you.
Cheers!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Your poem is filled with simple, precious sentiments! I haven't seen very many father-daughter relationships filled with such wonder & gratitude . . . your Zoe is one fortunate little lady who will grow up with a huge advantage, having you on her side the way it is described in your beautiful words (((HUGS)))

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Aly
This is so beautiful! You seem like a great father and I'm pretty jealous of her :) very well written

Posted 1 Year Ago


so sweet and pure, love at its most honest form as it unfolds straight from a fathers heart. well written,

Posted 1 Year Ago


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AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Lola :)
Hey!!! That is really nice piece of writing....
Your daughter is really lucky to have a loving father like you
This would be the best birthday gift for her....
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...

Posted 1 Year Ago


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AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Riddhi :) Appreciate your compliments my friend.
simply perfect. when your daughter is older this will be lovely for her to read and see just how muchyou have always oved and been so proud of her. full marks..again lol

Posted 1 Year Ago


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AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you my friend :) Her most recent bday just passed and it was nice to reflect on this write an.. read more
hcarson

1 Year Ago

not changed except to grow even more no doubt :)
Aaron, keep this for her, laminate it for her to keep with her when you can't be there. Kids think parents are supposed to love them, but saying you're proud of her means as much or more.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jan :) I have had it over a year and still keep meaning to go do it. Hopefully this week.. read more
actually i cried..as my father was never told of me he knows not of my birth...i honestly used o cry when i heard and saw brides at weddings dancing with their fathers as i know that will not be me. this is so sweet... thank you for writing this!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Damn I'm sorry to hear that. It's gotta be hard. Hopefully you have people that love you although .. read more
Writing Angel

1 Year Ago

thank you as i have one whom will love me no matter what...
AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

That's awesome... you can't replace that love :) And thanks for the comment on the pic :)
how sweet this is.... i bet she is sweet and cute... god bless her always.... the whole poem flowing with a father's affection and love... sweetly done!!!! full ratings.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


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AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much. She definitely is... she is full of life and it just kind of opens my heart up.. read more

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