Faith First

Faith First

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Acrostic Poem in honor of National Acrostic poem day

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F rom the beginning of our existence 

A ll man kind has sinned

I t started with Eve taking that simple first bite

T hen sin became part of our normal existence

H ow can we as humans change our future paths?


F irst we can put our faith first

I f we truly believe in faith we can slowly improve our lives

R eality is that judgement day will arrive

S ome will find the Heaven’s and some will fall to hell

T ime to decide, will you put your faith first?


© 2015 AaronFreitas



Author's Note

AaronFreitas
my first try at an acrostic poem

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Very nice Aaron but it started with Eve yielding to the temptation that resulted in the first bite from the apple

Bill

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes indeed :)
This is great! My only correction would be *Heavens

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review... I will fix that as soon as I can. :)
well you did a great job with it,and a good message

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Very good for a first try :) The message here is very strong. Lovely poem :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Ana!
Oh, that was very nice first try! I like the introduction to the story of how sin was born. And then how we can seek redemption from our ancestral sins as well as our own.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Nadia... I'll be honest I was bored and haven't written much, well haven't poste.. read more
For your first try that's really awesome.
You are so talented Aaron!!

Great piece!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks Nikki... means a lot!
Nice use of thoughts in the poem. Faith, love and kindness. We followed the teaching of Jesus. This world would be a better place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review. I was trying to figure out a good term or good words to do an a.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You did very well. Hopeful and good thoughts.
This is fantastic! I am going crazy over here:) I'm so impressed my brother!
You just blew me away! All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much... I got that email about acrostic poem... no lie had to look it up make sure I .. read more

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Added on March 3, 2015
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Tags: Acrostic, Faith, Spiritual

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