Unstable

Unstable

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Some thoughts going through this journey we call life

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Unstable, like a newborn giraffe

Legs are crumbling, struggling to hold

Falling, like leaves from an old oak tree

Shattered like pieces from a dropped glass

 

Need supreme strength to re-mold myself

Strong like the Egyptian pyramids,

Permanent like the Mayan ruins

Strength that’s as durable as graphene

 

It’s time to rebuild myself

And start this life all over

Create a purpose in life

Find ways, inspire others

 

© 2015 AaronFreitas


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Unstable, like a newborn giraffe
Legs are crumbling, struggling to hold
Falling, like leaves from an old oak tree
Shattered like pieces from a dropped glass

reality

It’s time to rebuild myself
And start this life all over
Create a purpose in life
Find ways, inspire others

inspirational


............................:)...................

like it.

thanks for sharing


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much irenic :) Sometimes life feels that way but you gotta find strength any where y.. read more
Irenic

8 Years Ago

Welcome...........:)



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I agree.
"It’s time to rebuild myself
And start this life all over
Create a purpose in life
Find ways, inspire others"
Thank you for sharing the positive and good wisdom. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

8 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote... appreciate your feedback and kind words my friend :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Unstable, like a newborn giraffe
Legs are crumbling, struggling to hold
Falling, like leaves from an old oak tree
Shattered like pieces from a dropped glass

reality

It’s time to rebuild myself
And start this life all over
Create a purpose in life
Find ways, inspire others

inspirational


............................:)...................

like it.

thanks for sharing


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much irenic :) Sometimes life feels that way but you gotta find strength any where y.. read more
Irenic

8 Years Ago

Welcome...........:)
Gosh Aaron this one hit close to home especially the fist 2 stanzas
Keep going dude:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

8 Years Ago

I am glad you could relate to it... it's always a more powerful impact when the reader can relate to.. read more
Short but inspiring, Aaron!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much Emily :) Check out my new one I posted today my friend :)
Emily

8 Years Ago

Ok, will do!
AaronFreitas

8 Years Ago

Thanks my friend :)
The scriptures say there is a time to build and a time tear down and all things in there due season We have more resolve than we realize acknowledging this is a good start carry on my friend

Bill

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much my friend!!!
W R Stowe

8 Years Ago

your quite welcome
Great piece, love! I don't think you realize how truly talented you are!
You inspire me, daily!

I love the part about the baby Giraffe!
Great Job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Ashley :)
♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome!
WOW! Aaron that was amazing... And that poemed has inspired someone already. That is me... That very deep to... Keep up the good work! And that is so true... Life is totally like that.. From what I've already been through. Life can be a pain in the rear! lol. Again amazing piece Aaron ;-) ♥

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you Tessa! I am glad it inspired you :)
Tessa Danielle Guise

9 Years Ago

No thank you!!!!! Im not much of a writer but it inspires me to write alot more!!!! So thank you so .. read more
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Such beautiful thoughts you share :) Truly lovely

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you again Lynn.... I appreciate you stopping by to read my work :)
Beautiful poem! So well written and has a lovely flow to it. I also Identify giraffes as my spirit animal so the bit about the giraffe made me smile ear to ear, love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

haha I admit the Giraffe picture was awesome by itself lol... I am glad you liked it. Thanks for th.. read more
There's much strength in these words. We all have a purpose, we must live it.
A good write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Melinda. I am slowly finding my purpose and doing the best I can with it :)

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