This is Good-bye

This is Good-bye

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Something that came to mind earlier

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I waited patiently for you

Like a child lost in the snow

With no sense of where to go

 

Yet, you never came for me

Like an abandoned puppy

Waiting patiently for a family

 

So now I fade into the night

Without a love in sight

Or the will to continue to fight

 

This is good-bye

 


© 2015 AaronFreitas



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The whole defeated underlined tone of knowing the time has come for a goodbye. It can be so painful, but in the case where saying goodbye and fulling understanding that the time has come for you to part can make the impact that less painful. Very good short, poignant piece right here. Good job.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Samm... much appreciated. Kept this one short and to the point.



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Sometime the goodbye is needed. A sad tale leading to a lonely ending. Thank you Aaron for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote... much appreciated buddy :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Aaron.
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This feels like a child would when a parent leaves them. I say that because it's how I felt. I feel like one big scar sometimes. My father's dead now and I'm still here, and so are you :) Deeply touching words you write, Aaron!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Lynn.... I am glad you can relate to these words. Appreciate your review :)
i had to take another look at this sad write
it could describe so many situations in life
reminds me of a child waiting on a parent that didn`t show

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks wordman... I hadn't seen this piece in a while and it got a review that kind of brought me ba.. read more
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you are welcome
Ohhh.. So SAD! It's just so BEAUTIFUL how some can relate their feelings with someone else's! I love Your write very very much. You have Uniquely described everything. Very Painful YET Amazing! I'm SIMPLY FLATTERED by this poetry!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Dreamer... I didn't realize you hadn't see this one :) This one was a painful l.. read more
Destiny Dreamer

2 Years Ago

You are WELCOME. Yeah U are right, it's better to move on. But, I don't know why sometimes we regret.. read more
farewell's are painful and one never knows if it will be a GOOD bye or a BAD one.
But the bravest step is to take stand for oneself and say GooD Bye.
It's beautiful :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ankita :) I appreciate your review and comments. It is brave so say good bye and initiat.. read more
Ankita

2 Years Ago

Yes it is necessary i agree..
after all New beginnings always start with a Good Bye. :)
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Very true :)
nice poem which makes the emotion of sadness visible. nice piece


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yeah it was a moment I decided I was fed up trying to be nice and civil and just cutting ties the be.. read more
My present moment.. *sighs* this is very simple but deep! Love how you express

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend! Pure honest write from me... sometimes need to get these out :)
silent poet

2 Years Ago

Very welcome and yes I definitely understand!
I really hate being stood up by people you choose to depend on. This happened a lot with an ex boyfriend of mine. I'm sorry for what pain this brings, but sadly, some people don't know how to be there for others when it's truly needed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes it is Svetlana :) Appreciate your review my friend... haven't seen ya in a while... thank you v.. read more
I Am Svetlana

2 Years Ago

Pardon my not being around much. Been real busy and working on new work :)
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Sweet... no problem I appreciate when you are around :)
The whole defeated underlined tone of knowing the time has come for a goodbye. It can be so painful, but in the case where saying goodbye and fulling understanding that the time has come for you to part can make the impact that less painful. Very good short, poignant piece right here. Good job.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Samm... much appreciated. Kept this one short and to the point.
You did great with this piece. Feels like You're drained. I mean like your energy and will for life is drained. A really well written poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you IM... I was my friend. I am just getting to my read requests and I got your message so I .. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

You are welcome:) and its no problem, i know you have a lot on your hands too. Like everyone else, i.. read more

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